captivating story! love the opening intro. only advice is work a teensy bit more on the life drawings because the animation is good, but with a little brushing up, it could be spectacular. looking forward to the next one!
teensy bit? more like a whole lot more :), but I'm still improving, stay tuned for episode 2, It's well on its way
good drawings! it almost had a plot, keep working on your writing skills or collaborate with someone next time. i love the detailed kitty face, reminds me of Ricardio the Heart Guy from Adventure Time. Keep animating!
Animation-wise, it's a very good blend of some puppet animation with those old Looney Toons era ones. Love the angles and how you composed the scenes, particularly the montage, haha. Looking forward to more stuff from you!
that was horrible that she died but i laughed like shit.
this was actually really good. some backgrounds would make it PERFECT though.
i didnt get it at first, but when i did i was like "OH SHITT THATS GOOD". could use better graphics, but this is a perfect example of how the concept is more important than looks. keep at it and soon your animation will be as good as your storytelling skills!
Im working on it! Thanks!
omg this is exactly how i felt when my dad got his FOR FREE because of his contract, and i had to settle with a crap sony erricsson W980 which has so many problems and doesnt even live up to the features in the brochure. 2-year contract too, which means no iPhone till 2011 :C
oh yeah, great animation and song too.
why did this take 2 years to get to front page?
asides from that, this flash has a great animation, and i actually really like the song too.
towards the end i thought this was gonna turn out to be a really sad flash. and then you did a complete 180. still, awesome storytelling! and the animation was flawless! keep it up!
I knew this flash had your style all over it!
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